Question

一个好的学生应该具有许多优秀品质（如下图所示），你认为哪个或哪两个是最重要的呢？为什么？请分析原因，并结合自己的生活实际，写下你的感悟。

 

 

要求：

1．词数：120左右；

2．文中不出现真实的学生姓名。

注意：

1．文章连贯，条理清楚，详略得当；

2．结合实际，写出真情实感。

(要点一：学生应该具有哪些优秀品质)

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Personally speaking, （要点二：你认为最重要的品质）______________________________

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The reasons are as follows.

（要点三：原因一并结合生活实际）

To begin with, _____________________________________________________________

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（要点四：原因二并结合生活实际）

Besides, __________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

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From then on, I have kept the following in my minds: （要点五：感悟）_______________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Being passionate, honest and hard-working, a good student is always listening and learning. Personally speaking, I strongly believe that honesty is the most important among dozens of good qualities.

There is a proverb that goes “Honesty is the best policy”, and it seems as true as it was when first coined. The most important element in human relationships, whether business or personal, is trust.

Here is one of my secrets. I once lied to my parents because of my poor scores. Having known the real fact from teachers, they praised and encouraged me, showing their deep love. Later days, my conscience swallowed me, growing as I told lie after lie in an effort to conceal my original deceit. I gave it up, and chose to be frank. Wow! It is better to stick to the truth!

From then on, I have kept the following in my minds: If it is not true, don’t say it. If it is not right, don’t do it. Honesty is not only the best policy, but also a principle, which is absolutely essential for the good and happy living of life.

【解析】

试题分析：考查图表和提纲式书面表达：图表作文要仔细审题，找到主题，围绕主题展开，还有要添加些内容，使文章看起更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，因为又是提纲类作文，本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】Being passionate, honest and hard-working, a good student is always listening and learning.这句话是现在分词做伴随状语，There is a proverb that goes “Honesty is the best policy”,这句话that引导的是宾语从句，The most important element in human relationships, whether business or personal, is trust.这句话是让步状语从句，Having known the real fact from teachers, they praised and encouraged me, showing their deep love.这是用了现在分词的完成式做状语，Honesty is not only the best policy, but also a principle, which is absolutely essential for the good and happy living of life.这句话是用了not only…but also….搭配。这些都是高中学生必须掌握的用法。

考点：考查图表和提纲式书面表达