题目内容
【题目】书面表达
你们的外教Thomas 先生准备举行一场以 Music and My Life 为题的英语作文比赛,请你根据下面的内容写一篇英语短文。
内容包括:
1. 你喜欢的音乐类型;
2. 你最喜欢在什么时候听音乐以及原因;
3. 你对音乐的感受。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Music and My Life
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【答案】
Music and My Life
As is known, music plays an important role in our life. Many people think life will be boring without music and I’m among them. There are many kinds of music, among which I like pop music best.
As for me, I like listening to music when I feel stressed or anxious because it can make me feel comfortable. Besides, I also listen to music at night, which can help me relax and fall asleep easily.
As far as I’m concerned, music makes my life more colorful. More importantly, I think music is a universal language, through which I can understand another culture better.
【解析】
试题分析:本文是根据所给内容写一篇英语短文参加一场以 Music and My Life 为题的英语作文比赛,写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】本文用了很精彩的短语和句子:As is known总所周知, plays an important role in 在... 发挥重要作用,As for me 对我来说,Besides 还有,As far as I’m concerned 就我看来,More importantly更重要的是。 There are many kinds of music, among which I like pop music best.是定语从句,I like listening to music when I feel stressed or anxious 是时间状语从句,I also listen to music at night, which can help me relax and fall asleep easily. 是非限制性定语从句I think music is a universal language, through which I can understand another culture better. 是定语从句