Question

学校英语论坛针对目前城市交通拥堵、污染严重的问题进行了“治堵方案大家谈”的讨论。以下是讨论概要。

【写作内容】请根据以上概要写一篇短文，包括以下内容：

1、存在的问题；     2、解决的方案；      3、方案的好处。

【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容。

【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, the problem of traffic jams in cities is as serious as that of air pollution. Some suggested solutions to these problems include a reduction in the use of private cars and an increase in the practice of car-pooling, where one car is shared by several workmates or friends. In addition, the government could improve the public transport system in order to make it more convenient for people. The government should also encourage cycling by building more green lanes. This will help save money, time and energy as well as improve the environment.

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲作文，考生首先要仔细审题，话题是目前城市交通拥堵、污染严重的问题进行了“治堵方案大家谈”的讨论，要点是以表格给出；要考虑以下几个方面：（1）层次结构，（2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，因为只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。又要包括所有的要点，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。考生要多使用复杂句，一句话中多包含些信息，如范文里面的句子Some suggested solutions to these problems include a reduction in the use of private cars and an increase in the practice of car-pooling, where one car is shared by several workmates or friends.既有宾语从句，又有定语从句。

考点：提纲作文。

点评：作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合作文要求，句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色，使用高级词汇及句型。