Question

16．假设你是李华，下面是你的英国笔友Frankie写给你的电子邮件．请根据邮件内容，并结合生活实际，回复一封电子邮件．

注意：120-150词．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
With the development of the computer technology，the internet is becoming more and more popular．
随着计算机技术的发展，互联网越来越受欢迎．
高分句型二：
Of course，you should also pay attention to the rational use of computers，let it bring you more benefits．
当然，你也应该注意合理利用电脑，让它给你带来更多的好处．

解答 Dear Frankie，
I am very happy to hear you got A in exam．However，for the problem you have I think you should buy a computer with the money．With the development of the computer technology，the internet is becoming more and more popular（高分句型一）．You can find computers and the internet nearly everywhere in our life，work and study．Even，the internet is becoming one of the most important parts in our social life．Besides，you have a lot of new clothes，you always look cool．Of course，you should also pay attention to the rational use of computers，let it bring you more benefits（高分句型二）．
Yours，
Lihua．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．