题目内容

请根据下表提供的信息为《21世纪报(中学生版)》写一篇150词左右的报道,内容为西部贫困地区的一所农村学校接受”希望工程”资助后的变化。

受资助前

受资助后

学校名称

李家庄学校

希望学校

学生情况

多数学生因家贫辍学

辍学学生全部复学

办学条件

只有一所危房作教室;操场只是一块空地;一间办公室

一栋2层教学楼,包括音乐室、美术室、微机室等;体育用品齐全

你的感想

……

Children Return to School

Thanks to the Hope Project, great changes have taken place in a western country school.

This school used to be called Lijiazhuang School. Most of its pupils left school because their families were too poor to pay for their education. The only unsafe house had to be used as their classroom. And all the teachers shared one workroom. The playground was nothing but an open land.

Things are different now. All the children who left school have come to continue their studies. In the school yard stands a two-storeyed teaching building. There are rooms for music, art and computer teaching. The school is well equipped with sports facilities.

The school benefits from the Hope Project a great deal. For this reason, it is renamed Hope School.

The Hope Project is of great importance to our country. I hope that with help more and more children can get the opportunity to be educated. And I wish more and more people would offer to support the project.


解析:

本篇书面表达在贴近学生实际的学习生活的基础上把话题稍加放大,能够让学生在表达完自己的思想后,对社会对生活有所感悟和思考,从而达到引导学生关注社会关注生活的最终目的。

写作过程中要注意以下几个方面:

1. 引出话题内容的题干部分一定要阅读仔细。表格里面的信息要逐字品读和揣摩。

2.表达的内容主要体现出一种鲜明的变化对比来,所以用词选句都要体现“对比”意味。

3.本文又一鲜明特点是有一小部分的开放内容,及“你的感想”,可以说这是能让学生更多的施展才华,彰显个性的地方,但要注意方向性和限制性,不能乱表达。

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主要概况

范围:9个省、自治区(autonomous regions),?

1个直辖市(municipality);?

面积:540万平方千米;?

人口:2.85亿;

实施要点

交通建设:修建多条公路、铁路;?

环境保护:退耕还林;防治污染;?

资源利用:开发利用其丰富的天然资源(resource);?

人才引进:广纳各类专家、技术人员。

注意:?

1.文章须包括所有提示要点,可适当增减细节,使内容连贯;?

2.短文的开头与结尾已经给出;?

3.词数100左右。?

New Development for Central and Western China?

The Chinese government has recently decided to develop central and western China.

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We have every reason to believe that the development will be a great success. As a result of the great project, central and western regions of China will surely achieve better and faster development in the new century. The people will have a better life and China will surely be richer and stronger.

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