题目内容
假定你是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现在正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信,内容应包括:
个人情况:年龄、性别、学历
个人条件:英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况。
承诺:提供最佳服务
注意:
词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
生词:申请 apply(v.),application (n.);志愿者 volunteer
Dear Sir /Madam,
My name is LiHua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.
One possible version:
My name is LiHua .I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.
I am a girl of 18.As a college student, I have a keen interest in sports and I have always been looking forward to the games to be held here.
With the great fluency in English and the passion for sports, I suppose I am qualified to be a volunteer for the Games. Besides, I have a good communicative competence and I am considered to be an outgoing, reliable and helpful person at college. What’s more,, I am familiar with the local conditions. I promise I will offer the best service to whoever participates in the games.
Now I formally apply for the job and I sincerely hope I can be accepted.
Yours faithfully,
LiHua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达是要求写一封申请信,类似于自我介绍,学生应该很容易把握写作要求。考生在写作之前必须认真审题,首先要注意文章的时态,申请信要求介绍自己情况,所以要用一般现在时,当然也必须用第一人称。写作时不要根据材料逐字翻译,应该注意细节的补充以及文章结构上的衔接,以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文章格式正确,要点全面。不仅As a college student; with the great fluency in English and passion for sports 等短语使句子更为简洁生动,而且keen,qualified,participates in 等高级词汇的使用也使文章锦上添花,此外Besides ,What’s more 等插入语也让上下文衔接更为紧凑,读起来朗朗上口。
考点:提纲作文。