Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词仅限一词；

      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Senior Three stud ent will face the question after they pass by the college entrance exam符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。

注意:????????????? 1. 每处错误及修改均ination. “Should I choose a good major and a good university ?” Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested . It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find good jobs. In my opinion , a best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we couldn’t obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

1.student改为students

2.去掉by

3.and改为or

4.加上in

5.possibly改为possible

6.believes改为believe

7.graduate改为graduating或在graduate加who

8.a改为the

9.couldn’t改为can’t

10.they改为we

【解析】

试题分析：目前高三的毕业生都面临着一个选择大学和选择专业的问题。很多学生倾向于考虑专业，这样他们就够选择自己喜欢的专业。然而有些学生认为名牌大学毕业的学生在未来就业方面有着更大的优势。在我看来，最好的选择是名牌大学的品牌专业。

1.考查名词。 Senior Three student will face the question。student是可数名词，从句意可知此处应该用复数，把student改为students。

2.考查动词用法。after they pass by the college entrance examination.。pass是及物动词，后面不需用介词，去掉by 。

3.考查连词。?? Should I choose a good major and a good university。从句意可知此处表示选择，所以把and改为or。

4.考查介词。? so that they can learn what they are interested。固定短语be interested in，所以在句末加上in。

5.考查形容词。? It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs。固定结构：make+it +adj/n“使……成为”，所以把possibly改为possible。

6.考查主谓一致。? those who think differently believes that the environment is important 。定语从句中的关系代词做主语时，谓语动词要和先行词在人称和数上保持一致，此处先行词是those，所以把believes改为believe。

7.考查定语从句或非谓语。They also believe that students graduate from leading universities。从结构可知此处graduate是做定语修饰students，应该用现在分词，所以把graduate改为graduating或在graduate加who。

8.考查冠词。? a best choice is to choose a good major at a good university 。形容词最高级前用定冠词the，所以把a改为the。

9.考查动词时态。. But if we couldn’t obtain both。文章讲述的是过去的事情，此处应该用一般过去时，把couldn’t改为can’t。

10.考查代词。 they can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.。根据上下文可知此处人称代词指代混乱，应该说“我们”的情况，所以把they改为we。

考点：考查短文改错。