Question

写作

短文改错

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　After I finished the school this year, I been

1．________

to look for work. Now several month later, I still

2．________

hadn't found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday

3．________

morning I received a phone call from a man calling him

4．________

Mr. Smith. He said to me on the phone,“I hear you do

5．________

very good in your studies. I may have a job for you.”

6．________

I entered his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped

7．________

that I will go through the job-hunting talk today and he

8．________

would take on me as a lab assistant. But to my surprised,

9．________

what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.

10．________

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

1．the删去　　导解：“上学、放学”用go to school, finish school在此表示“毕业”。 　　2．month→months　　导解：用复数名词表示“几个月后”。 　　3．interested后加in　　导解：be interested in指“对……有兴趣”。 　　4．him→himself　　导解：表示“一个自称是……”。 　　5．√ 　　6．good→well　　导解：do well in/be good at表示“学得好，擅长于”。 　　7．beaten改为beating　　导解：表示“一颗跳动的心”。 　　8．will→would　　导解：从句与主句时态保持一致，用过去将来时。 　　9．surprised→surprise　　导解：to one's surprise表示“令……惊讶”。 　　10．said后加was作谓语　　导解：“他所说的话令人失望”。