题目内容
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My fire department captain, Mike, who is always ready to serve for others, has a brain disease. Last week, we raised money for him and his family to help them with medically expenses. Many people also came to us to write message to Mike on a white board. Beside, we downloaded many photos of friends, encouraged words, and beautiful photos of our area onto a digital device. We make a video with all the things. Yesterday, we went to the hospital and gave a board and the video our captain. Our goal is: unless he gets discouraged or feels lonely, he can play the video to remind him of all the people who love and care for us.