Question

15．为迎接儿童节的到来，你们学校号召学生为希望工程（Project Hope）捐款．请你用英语给校刊写一篇文章，希望同学们伸出援助之手，奉献自己的爱心．题目为：Welcome to Donate for Project Hope．内容包括：
1、介绍目前中国农村儿童状况．特别是偏远地区的儿童，没钱读书，很多孩子辍学在家
2、捐助希望工程的意义
字数：100左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文是给校刊写一篇文章．希望同学们伸出援助之手，奉献自己的爱心．写作要点已经在表格中罗列清晰：1、介绍目前中国农村儿童状况．特别是偏远地区的儿童，没钱读书，很多孩子辍学在家；2、捐助希望工程的意义．只需要发表些自己的见解即可．注意文章使用的时态，呈现不同观点和发表个人见解多使用一般现在时．写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：In order to以便，为了；call on呼吁，号召；far from远不，远非；benefit from从…中受益；As is known to all众所周知；drop from school辍学；
In order to meet the arrival of Children's Day，our school called on the students to make some donations for the Project Hope．（高分句型一）
  Project Hope is a good way to promote the education in the rural areas，but it is far from being sufficient．（高分句型二）
Since the economic conditions there are rather poor，many families，especially in the remote areas，cannot afford to send their children to school，many children have to drop from school．（高分句型三）

解答 Welcome to Donate for Project Hope
      In order to meet the arrival of Children's Day，our school called on the students to make some donations for the Project Hope．（高分句型一）
      Project Hope is a good way to promote the education in the rural areas，but it is far from being sufficient．（高分句型二）By now，only a small portion/part of the children benefit from it．
      As is known to all，China has the largest population in the world and most of them live in the countryside．Since the economic conditions there are rather poor，many families，especially in the remote areas，cannot afford to send their children to school，many children have to drop from school．（高分句型三）（目前中国农村儿童状况）The"Project Hope"is aimed at solving this problem so that every child of school age can receive regular education．It doesn't matter how much you're going to donate．One hundred yuan will help such a child finish（捐助希望工程的意义）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．