题目内容
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!
deep改成deeply
in后面去掉the
bad,改成 worse
direction. Directions或all改成any
rush改成rushed
know改成knowing
picked 后面加 up
missed改成missing/lost
your改成our
what t改成hat
【解析】
修饰动词moved。故用deeply. 表示抽象意义的深深地。
in the front of 表示里面的前面,in front of 就表示“在…的前面”
固定短语:To make things worse, 更糟糕的是
in all directions 或in any direnction
讲述过去的事情,用过去时
现在分词做伴随状
pick up 捡起
be missing/be lost表示不见了
前面用的是my,故这里应用our
it为形式主语,that引导主语从句,在从句中不充当任何成分