Question

书面表达

目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”。请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。

主要原因	考试偏多、偏难
不用功、懒惰
取悦父母、老师
个人看法	作弊不对，违反校规
要诚实，努力学习
…（其他看法）

注意：1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；

2．短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

3．词数：120左右。 

4．参考词汇：作弊 cheat（v.），取悦please（v.）

My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations

It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.

                                                        

                                                        

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.

As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.

In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. What’s more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.

【解析】

试题分析：(1)认真审题，确定体裁。本文是议论文。 (2)构思要点。根据题目要求，理解要表达的要点．设计好文章的层次段落，考虑所用时态、人称等，把要点串联起来，构成文章框架。(3)选词造句，避难选易。(4)认真检查，避免错误。仔细阅读全文，查找是否有错，注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误，句式是否正确．逻辑是否一致。

考点：提纲作文。

点评：应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感。