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5．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Some phones had become part of our daily life．No matter who we are，we can see people busy play with their smart phones．Smart phones benefit them．They help us escape the pressure of life and get informations．However，if we spend too much time on them，we won't have time to contact face to our friends and family．And our life，study and work will be hurt．In my view，we should limit to our using smart phones except for a purpose of learning．Meanwhile，it's absolute necessary for us to take part in more outdoor activities．

分析 本文主要讲述智能手机成为我们生活的一部分，使我们受益．但我们不能沉溺于它们，作为学生，我们应当从学习的角度来使用它们，多参加户外活动．

解答 Some phones had become part of our daily life．No matter who we are，we can see people busy play with their smart phones．Smart phones benefit them．They help us escape the pressure of life and get informations．However，if we spend too much time on them，we won't have time to contact face to∧our friends and family．And our life，study and work will be hurt．In my view，we should limit to our using smart phones except for a purpose of learning．Meanwhile，it's absolute necessary for us to take part in more outdoor activities．
详解：
1．had改为have 考查动词时态．根据下文内容可知，此处是强调过去发生的动作对现在造成的影响，用现在完成时．
2．who改为where 考查连词．根据句意：无论我们在哪里，我们都能看到人们忙于玩他们的智能手机．用where．no matter where引导让步状语从句．
3．play改为playing 考查动名词．be busy doing sth．意为"忙于做某事"，固定搭配．
4．them改为us 考查代词．根据句意：智能手机使我们受益．用代词us．
5．pressure改为pressures 考查名词复数．此处指"生活的压力"，用复数．
6．informations改为information 考查名词．information是不可数名词，没有复数形式．
7．加face 考查词语用法．face to face意为"面对面"，是固定搭配．
8．去掉to 考查词语用法．limit是及物动词，其后直接跟宾语，to是多余的，要去掉．
9．a改为the 考查介词．for the purpose of意为"为了…"，是固定搭配．
10．absolute改为absolutely 考查副词．necessary是形容词，修饰形容词应用副词．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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