Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你班的留学生Charles即将结束三周的假期从美国返回。你想委托他为你代购一个剃须刀，作为生日礼物送给爸爸。请按照以下要求给他写一封电子邮件：

1．品牌：Gillette：

2．价格：30美元左右。

参考词汇：剃须刀shaver

注意：

1．词数100左右：

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：

3．开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Charles，

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Charles,

I haven’t seen you for over three weeks. How have you been doing these days? I miss you so much! But it won’t be long before we meet again, isn’t it?

Charles, could you do me a favor, please? My father’s birthday is coming, and I want to give him a shaver as a birthday gift. Just buy me a Gillette about 30 dollars. It is a very famous brand around the world. You can bring it back when you come back, and I will pay you back for that. Thank you very much.

Looking forward to your coming soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇为书信作文，一般开头是问候语。文章李华想让查尔斯带一个剃须刀，要交代清楚剃须刀的品牌和价格。因为是书信，语言不需要太正式。要用简练的语言表达出要点。考生可适当增加细节，使文章内容充实。注意词汇拼写要正确，句式多样化，还要正确使用连接词。使文章通顺连贯。

【亮点说明】文章开头问候了朋友，用了非常简练的语言，使人读起来跟亲切。正文交代了买剃须刀的原因，并明确交代了剃须刀的品牌和大约价位。文章行文流畅，用词准确，句式多样化。