题目内容
6．有些青少年为了显得更酷或更成熟而染上吸烟的坏习惯．针对这种现象，并为配合英语教学，你校决定举办一次英语征文活动，宣传吸烟的危害，倡导同学们远离香烟．请你根据以下提示写一篇短文．要点如下：
1．损害心肺，易致癌；
2．气味难闻；影响他人健康；
3．一旦上瘾，很难戒掉．
注意：
1．可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯．
2．字数80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）．
Disadvantage of Smoking
There are many adolescents who smoke．They think they look cool or appear more grown-up while smoking．
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分析 本文是篇材料作文，内容要求学生 宣传吸烟的危害，倡导同学们远离香烟． 议论文文体一般用一般现在时，注意增加细节，使前后句有恰当的衔接，还要尽量用高中阶段学习词汇和句型．注意长短句搭配．
【亮点说明】本文结构明确，思路清晰．把内容要点都涵盖了．同时注意应用较高级的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如 in fact，have bad effects on，do harm to，lead to，become addicted to，which引导的非限制性定语从句等等．并注意了句子的衔接如：besides，further more，so等等．
They think they look cool or appear more grown-up while smoking．（高分句型一）
It does harm to your heart and lungs，which might eventually lead to cancer．（高分句型二）
Further more，once you become addicted to smoking，it is really hard to quit．（高分句型三）
解答 There are many adolescents who smoke．They think they look cool or appear more grown-up while smoking．（高分句型一）
In fact，smoking is a bad habit．If you smoke，it has bad effects on your health．It does harm to your heart and lungs，which might eventually lead to cancer．（高分句型二）Cigarette smoke also affects the health of non-smokers．Besides，your breath and even clothes smell terrible．Further more，once you become addicted to smoking，it is really hard to quit．（高分句型三）
So，for the benefit of yourself and others，do not get into the bad habit of smoking．
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧
