题目内容
19.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
The Olympic Games is a great international sports festival,in that almost every nation send teams of selected athletes to take part.Both the Summer or Winter Olympic Games take place every four years.In 2008,the 29th Olympic Games was held in Beijing.It was the three time that the Summer Olympic Games have taken place in Asia.Athlete from 204National Olympic Committees were competed in 28sports and 302events.The Chinese team won 51gold medals,ranked first of all the competing countries.We Chinese managed to make the 29th Olympic Games best ever.The friendly people and beautiful scenery of China left a deep impression for athletes and sports fans from all over the world.
分析 奥运会是一个伟大的国际体育节日,每一个国家都会挑选精英运动员来参加.每四年举行一次冬季奥运会和夏季奥运会.2008年,在北京举行第29届奥运会.这是第三次在亚洲举办夏季奥运了.来自204个国家的运动员参加了28个体育运动和302个其他项目.中国赢得了51块金牌,是赢得金牌最多的国家.中国在29届奥运会表现出色.中国人民的友好和美丽的景色给来自全世界的运动员和体育爱好者留下了深刻的印象.
解答 The Olympic Games is a great international sports festival,in that almost every nation send teams of selected athletes to take part.Both the Summer or Winter Olympic Games take place every four years.In 2008,the 29th Olympic Games was held in Beijing.It was the three time that the Summer Olympic Games have taken place in Asia.Athlete from 204National Olympic Committees were competed in 28sports and 302events.The Chinese team won 51gold medals,ranked first of all the competing countries.We Chinese managed to make the 29th Olympic Games∧best ever.The friendly people and beautiful scenery of China left a deep impression for athletes and sports fans from all over the world.
解析:
1.that改为which.考查定语从句的关系词.在介词in后应该用which引导非限制性定语从句,代指主句.
2.send-sends.考查主谓一致.本句说的是现在的事,而主语almost every nation 是单数,所以谓语动词send用第三人称单数sends.
3.or改为and.考查连词.固定句式both…and表示"两者都",所以or改为and.
4.three改为third.考查数词.表示"第三次"用序数词third.
5.have改为had.考查谓语动词的时态.根据主句It was the three time 是一般现在时态,可知定语从句 that the Summer Olympic Games have taken place in Asia用过去完成时,所以have改为had.
6.Athlete改为Athletes.考查名词.Athlete是可数名词,所以表示来自204个国家的运动员,应该用复数Athletes.
7.were去掉.考查语态.compete和主语Athlete之间是主动关系,所以were去掉.
8.ranked改为ranking.考查非谓语动词.ranked first of all the competing countries表示"在所有参赛国家里排第一",做主句的必然的结果状语,所以用ranking.
9.best前加the.考查冠词.形容词最高级best前加the.
10.for改为on.考查介词.表示"给某人留下深刻印象"用固定短语leave a deep impression on sb.
点评 考查短文改错.
现在分词一般来说可以作时间、条件、原因、让步、结果、方式、伴随状语等等.每个给你举一个例子吧:
1,Walking in the street,I saw him.当我在街上走时,我看到他了.(时间)
2,Working hard,you will succeed.(只要)努力工作,你就会成功.(条件)
3,Being ill,she stayed at home.(因为)生病,她留在家里.(原因)
4,Having failed many times,he didn't lost heart.有很多次失败,他没有灰心.(让步)
5,His friend died,getting him a lot of money,他的朋友死了,(所以)给了他很多钱.(结果)
6,Please answer the question using another way.请用另一种方式回答这个问题.(方式)
7,Look at the people lying on the beach.看那些人正躺在沙滩上.