Question

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last summer, I was working at home a sunny day. For some reasons I went around to the front of the house to get anything. As I did so, I feel drops of rain on my face, that soon developed into a heavy shower. A few minute later, I went to the back of the house but realized that it was not raining at all there. It was raining only at the front and not at the back. I stood in the hallway, look one way––heavy rain and the another way––sunny and dry. Soon, the rain stopped complete. Up until then, I’d never seen such a strange weather.

 

Answer 1

1.a前加on

2.anyting-something

3.feel-felt

4.that-which

5.minute–minutes

6.but–and

7.look –looking

8.another-other

9.complete – completely

10.去掉a

【解析】

试题分析：在去年夏天一个阳光明媚的天气里作者在家工作，由于某种原因，作者到房前拿东西，天下起了雨，慢慢变成大雨。几分钟后，作者到房子后面时发现那边一点都没下雨。不久，雨就完全停了。作者最后说这是他以前从未见过如此奇怪的天气。

1.a前加on 考查介词。a sunny day 阳光明媚的一天，指在具体某一天，应用介词on。由I was working at home a sunny day.描述可知a sunny day在此做时间状语，所以前面要加表示具体某一天的介词on。

2. 考查不定代词。anyting用于疑问句或否定句，something用于肯定句。For some reasons I went around to the front of the house to get anything.这是一个肯定句，故把anyting改为something。

3. 考查动词时态。由文章开头Last summer,以及通读全文可知都是用一般过去时态，I feel drops of rain on my face，是描述过去那一天的事情，也应用一般过去时态，故把feel改为felt。

4.that-which考查非限制性定语从句。I feel drops of rain on my face, that soon developed into a heavy shower.我感到雨滴滴到我的脸上，不久就变成一场大雨。前面主句与后面从句用逗号隔开，说明从句是非限制性定语从句。非限制性定语从句应用which来引导，that不能引导非限制性定语从句。故把that改为which。

5.minute–minutes考查名词复数。A few minute later, A few意思是“一些”，后跟可数名词的复数形式。故把minute 改为minutes。

6.but–and 考查连词辨析。I went to the back of the house but realized that it was not raining at all there.我走到房子的后面，发现那根本没下雨。went 和realized两个动作表示意思顺承，要用连词and连接，不能用表转折关系的连词but. 故把but改为and。

7.look –looking 考查动词现在分词用法。I stood in the hallway, look one way……，现在分词looking作状语，与主语I为逻辑上的主动关系，是谓语动词stood的伴随动作，表示与stood动作同时发生。故把look 改为looking。

8.another-other 考查固定短语。……one way––heavy rain and the another way…… 固定短语：one……the other…… （两者中）一个……，另一个……，在此表示房前下雨的一面和房后阳光明媚干燥的另一面，只有这两面。another指三者或三者以上的任意的另一个，表泛指。故把s another改为other。

9.complete - completely 考查副词用法。the rain stopped complete. stopped是动词，修饰动词应该用副词形式，complete是形容词，completely是副词。故把complete改为completely。

10. 考查不可数名词。I’d never seen such a strange weather. 我从未见过如此奇怪的天气。weather 天气，是不可数名词，不可数名词前不能加冠词。故去掉a。

考点：考查短文改错