Question

11．请根据下面提示，写一篇短文．词数不少于50．
In your spoken English class，your teacher shows you the following picture．You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．

Answer 1

分析 试题提供一幅或一组图画及提示，考生围绕给定的主题写出若干句语境相符、语法正确、意思连贯的句子．此类题型关键是认真审题，从提示中了解所写的内容，列出提纲或拟个腹稿，然后分段表述，写出一篇脉络清晰、层次分明、文理通顺、意思连贯的短文．图画提示类作文涉及的题材比较广，可以是故事、新闻报道、地点介绍或说明，也可能是书信或日记等．本文可以根据自己的思考写出不同的立意，如：团结、爱心传递等．
亮点句型一This simple picture conveys a deep message that the world will be full of love when everybody passes their own love to others．句中that the world will be full of love when everybody passes their own love to others是一个同位语从句，对名词message进行解释说明．
亮点句型二：only when love is delivered from person to person can we sense each other's trust，concern，warmth，friendship，etc，which are vital for everyone's happiness．只有当爱从一个人传递到另一个人时，我们才能感受到对方的信任、关心、温暖、友谊等，这对每个人的幸福都是至关重要的．这是一个复合句，only when love is delivered from person to person 引导的时间状语置于句首，主句做部分倒装；which are vital for everyone's happiness是一个非限制性定语从句．

解答 As can be seen in the picture，many children are standing merrily in a circle，hand in hand．The circle is heart-shaped．
This simple picture conveys a deep message that the world will be full of love when everybody passes their own love to others．（亮点句型一）Love is important for us．Just as the picture above，only when love is delivered from person to person can we sense each other's trust，concern，warmth，friendship，etc，which are vital for everyone's happiness．（亮点句型二）
In a word，if every one of us can devote a bit of love to others，our lives will be more beautiful．

点评 看图作文是以图画或图表来提供目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等场景，要求作者借助图画，通过联想将一组画面的直观内容转换成传神达意的文字形式，用于反映图中所表现的思想内容，从写作体裁上看，可说明介绍，可叙事记人，可写景状物，也可以发表议论．
看图作文主要考查学生的观察能力、分析能力、想象能力、创造能力和语言表达能力．