Question

【题目】每到放学，家长接学生的车辆总会导致校门口的交通过度拥挤，学校对此非常苦恼。假如你是高二年级的学生李华，请给校长写一封信，分析一下该现象产生的原因，并提出你的建议。

注意：120词左右；开头已给出，不计入词数。

Mr. Wang,

I’m writing to you to share my opinions about the problem of heavy traffic every day after school at our school gate.

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Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Mr. Wang:

I'm writing to you to share my opinions about the problem of heavy traffic every day after school at our school gate.

With the development of economy, more and more families begin to have cars of their own, which contributes partly to the problem. Besides, some parents always try to park their cars as close as possible to the school gate, without taking anything else into consideration.

In order to solve it, I firmly hold the view that some effective measures must be taken. First, I think it necessary to call on all the students to go back home by bus or by bike. Second, if they have to be picked up by their parents by car, they'd better remind their parents to park their cars in proper places. Finally, it might be helpful to make students of different grades leave school at different times.

I hope my suggestions will be useful to help solve the problem.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文属于半开放性作文。要求分析放学时学校门口拥挤的原因，并提出之间的建议。属于议论文性质，所以使用一般现在时和第三人称。

要点：校门口拥堵的原因：1.越来越多的家庭拥有汽车；2.很多家长总是把车停在靠近校门口的地方，不考虑别人的感受；解决的方法：1.号召家距离学校不远的学生步行或者骑自行车回家；2.提醒父母亲有序停车。3.错开放学的时间；

本文在分析原因的时候和列举解决方法的时候都要使用议论文常有的方法，要特别注意连词的使用。同时要注意使用高级词汇和高级句式。