Question

随着社会的发展，交流通讯方式也越来越方便快捷多元化。几乎每个高中生都有了自己的QQ号，可以用QQ和自己的朋友聊天，向老师问问题，交流思想。但有的同学花了太多的时间在QQ上，有的QQ好友甚至有几百人之多。请你就以上现象加以分析，并发表自己的看法。首句已给出，不计入总词数。

注意：词数不少于100词。

With the development of science and technology, the way of communication has become increasingly diverse and convenient.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

With the development of science and technology, the way of communication has become increasingly diverse and convenient. People can communicate with their friends or relatives freely in different ways. Among them chatting on the QQ is one of the most popular ones. Almost every senior middle school student has their own QQ number, with which they can chat with their friends, ask their teachers to help them solve their puzzles and exchange their thoughts. QQ is really a helpful tool to them.

However, some students have spent too much time chatting with their QQ friends, some of whom are totally strangers. Most talk on the QQ is completely meaningless. What’s worse, some students have hundreds of QQ friends, taking up almost all their spare time, even in the classroom.

I do think that QQ can bring us much convenience and benefit when we are communicating with others, but what we should do is use it properly and reasonably. We should limit our time on it and devote ourselves to our studies.

【解析】

试题分析：提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。