题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,Jane 是美国人。在她暑假来中国游玩时你们相识,并成为好朋友。Jane回国后,你很想念她,于是给她写了一封信,并且和她谈了你对高一新生活的感受。信头信尾均已给出;词数100左右。
Dear Jane,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jane,
How’s everything going?
I’m so glad to have met you and become friends with you. I miss you very much after you left China and thus I am writing this letter to tell you something about me. I entered senior high school in September. The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges. My teachers and classmates are all very kind. I have decided to try my best to learn a lot from them. Of course, I will also do more exercise to keep fit.
Give my best regards to your parents and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于提纲作文,内容是给Jane写了一封信,并且和她谈了你对高一新生活的感受。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4.注意书信格式。
【亮点说明】本文层次分明,结构紧凑,语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构,如宾语从句The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges.等。