Question

7．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
    （2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Being responsible is actually not that difficult．I used to think it is hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society．An incident happening in a rainy Sunday afternoon changed my attitude．I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light while a girl was knocked down by passing car，which drove off quickly．A man immediately gave her first aid and I had joined in without hesitation．Soon many help was given to the girl．Because we sent her to the nearest hospital in time，she was able to receive properly treatment．Not badly injured，I expressed gratitude to those giving help．Compared with the escaping driver，I was proud of that I did．

Answer 1

分析 本文讲述了作者帮助一个在交通事故中受伤的女孩的故事．
在一个下雨天，一个等候绿灯的女孩被一辆车给撞了，司机逃跑了，一个路人赶快对她实施急救，我也毫不迟疑的加入了，更多的人加入救助女孩的行动中，她被送到最近的医院接受治疗，她很感激我们，我也为自己骄傲．

解答 Being responsible is actually not that difficult．I used to think it is hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society．An incident happening in a rainy Sunday afternoon changed my attitude．I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light while a girl was knocked down by∧passing car，which drove off quickly．A man immediately gave her first aid and I had joined in without hesitation．Soon many help was given to the girl．Because we sent her to the nearest hospital in time，she was able to receive properly treatment．Not badly injured，I expressed gratitude to those giving help．Compared with the escaping driver，I was proud of that I did．
解析：
1：is改为was．考查时态．因为这是作者过去以为的事情，用一般过去时，主语是it．故is改成was．
2：in改为 on．考查介词．和具体的某一天的下午"a rainy Sunday afternoon"搭配用介词on．故in改成on．
3：while改为when．考查状语从句的引导词．a girl was knocked down 是时间点，和when搭配，while和一段时间搭配．故while改成when．
4：by后面加a．考查冠词．这里泛指"一辆路过的车"，用不定冠词，passing是辅音音素开头的单词．故by后面加a．
5：去掉had．考查谓语动词的时态．和gave并列的动作用一般过去时．去掉had．
6：many改为much．考查不可数名词的修饰词．help"帮助"是不可数名词，用much修饰，many修饰可数名词．改成much．
7：properly改成proper．考查形容词和副词的辨析．修饰名词treatment用形容词．故properly改成proper．
8：I改成she．考查代词．句意：受伤不重，她表达对帮助的人的感谢．因为是女孩受伤，人称应该是she．I改成she．
9：escaping改成escaped．考查非谓语动词．"逃跑的司机"用escaped，表示动作已经完成．故escaping改成escaped．
10：that改为what．考查名词性从句的引导词．引导I was proud of 的宾语从句I did，做从句I did的宾语用what．that在名词性从句中不做句子成分．

点评 考查短文改错．
解答类题型时，要注意一下几点：
1．注意句子中人称和数是否一致．
2．时态是否一致．
3．各种词性之间的区别．
4．一些常用句型，固定短语的应用．
一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考查的就是我们的基础知识．平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构．