Question

假如你是张华， 近日写信给某英文报的编辑，反映目前人们滥养宠物的问题，希望得到媒体的关注和支持。信的内容应包括以下要点：

1.宠物过多，噪音扰民； 2. 污染环境； 3. 不少人尤其孩子曾被惊吓或咬伤；4. 传播疾病。

   注意：1.词数100左右;

         2.信的开头和署名已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear editor, Nowadays some people in our city are keeping too many pets, but they don’t care about it enough. So I want to tell you something about the problems caused by it.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours faithfully,                                                                          Zhang Hua

Answer 1

Dear editor,

Nowadays some people in our city are keeping too many pets, but they don’t care about it enough. So I want to tell you something about the problems caused by it.

I consider the problems more and more serious for the following reasons. First of all, as is known to us, pets make too much noise that trouble residents a lot. What’s more, it’s widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment, which makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public places where they may frighten children or even sometimes bite people. The most important is that pets can spread some disease and this has attracted much attention.

Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for it.

                                                                   Yours truly,

                                                                   Zhang Hua

解析:

文章行文力争自然流畅，文章要点齐全，意思表达真切。详略得当，重点突出。从语言使用的角度来说，要使用一些生动的动词，准确的名词，同时为了使本文串联自然，可以使用时间状语为连接词，将文章按照时间顺序叙述完整。