Question

书面表达（共计10分）

根据下面漫画写一篇短文，叙述淘气的孩子Tom捉弄他父亲的经过。字数100左右。第一句话和最后一句话已给出。

下列词语供选用：

cactus仙人掌  prickly 多刺的  switch off 关掉

Tom is a naughty boy. _____________________________________________________________

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________________________________________________. You can imagine his father’s pain, and great anger when he realized what happened!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Tom is a naughty boy. He likes to play tricks on others. He knows that his father needs an alarm clock to wake him up at 6:30 every morning, so one morning, he decided to play a trick on him. He got up at 6:20 and slipped into the bedroom of his parents, who were still sleeping soundly. He took away the clock from the bedside table, and put a cactus there instead. He stood beside the bed, waiting for the clock to ring. At 6:30, the clock went off and woke up his father. His father, who did not open his eyes, reached out his hand to switch off the clock. But he touched the prickly cactus and let out a loud cry of pain. You can imagine his father’s pain, and great anger when he realized what happened!

【解析】

试题分析：这种题型更能考查学生的分析问题的能力，因此深受命题者的青睐。考生应注意认真审题，一旦审题有所偏颇，不容易得到高分。此类作文首先要描述图画，然后介绍图画背后所反映的问题，最后联系实际发表自己的观点。

考点：图画作文。

点评：看图写作要求考生要仔细观察所提供的图画，抓住图画所要表达的中心思想，还应注意画面的细节。只有宏观与微观相结合，才能读懂图意、抓住要点。只有深入体会画图者的创作意图，才能了解作者在颂扬什么，反对什么或讽刺什么。考生还应根据题目要求和图画的提示，充分发挥自己的想像力，使文章充实生动。在读图的过程中，可以根据图画内容列出写作提纲，列出重点的单词、词组或句型，然后连句成文。在写的过程中，要注意使图与图之间衔接自然，层次清楚，还应注意图示以外的相关信息。