Question

14．假定你是李华，你校附近一个外资工厂夜晚发出的噪音影响了你校学生．请你写一封信给工厂老板Mr．Albert反映这一问题．书信的内容要点如下：
1．写信目的；
2．噪音对你的影响；
3．你的建议 （如：更换设备）．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好．
Dear Mr．Albert，
I am Li Hua，a student from the high school near your factory．
I'm writing to let you know about the noises from your factory．Every night，the factory makes such loud noises that all the students in my school are seriously disturbed．I find it hard to fall asleep during the night，and then I can hardly focus my attention on my study during the daytime．I always feel sleepy in classes and that's just because the noises make it impossible for me to have a good sleep at night．
I wish you could think of some ways to solve this problem．Would you please consider improving or changing the equipment in your factory？
Looking forward to your reply．
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是写给工厂老板Mr．Albert一封信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一写信目的；二噪音的影响；三建议；四期盼答复．
高分句型：
1．I find it hard to fall asleep during the night，and then I can hardly focus my attention on my study during the daytime．句子里it是形式宾语，代指动词不定式to fall asleep during the night； focus my attention on 表示"集中注意力在某事上"．
我发现夜晚很难入睡，这样白天我几乎不能集中精力学习．
2．I always feel sleepy in classes and that's just because the noises make it impossible for me to have a good sleep at night．句子里 because 引导表语从句；表语从句中it是形式宾语，代指动词不定式to have a good sleep at night．
我上课的时候总是很困倦，那时因为噪音让我晚上很难睡好．

解答 A Possible Version：
Dear Mr．Albert，
I am Li Hua，a student from the high school near your factory．
    I'm writing to let you know about the noises from your factory．（写信目的）Every night，the factory makes such loud noises that all the students in my school are seriously disturbed．I find it hard to fall asleep during the night，and then I can hardly focus my attention on my study during the daytime．【高分句型一】I always feel sleepy in classes and that's just because the noises make it impossible for me to have a good sleep at night．【高分句型二】（噪音的影响）
    I wish you could think of some ways to solve this problem．Would you please consider improving or changing the equipment in your factory？（建议）
    Looking forward to your reply．（期盼答复）
Sincerely yours，
 Li Hua

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