题目内容
10.你的表弟Jack即将踏入高中学习,你写信给他.信的内容应包括:1. 简要描述你自己的高中学习生活.
2. 给他的高中生活提些建议.(建议可包括:规划好日常生活、找到适合自己的学习方法、多参加课外活动等…)
分析 这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.
高级词汇 full of happiness and sorrow; To begin with In addition; broaden your horizons; benefit your future life; Last but not least; encounter many difficulties or setbacks
解答 Dear Jack,
How is it going?I'm very glad to know you will be a senior middle school student next term.Congratulations!(表示祝贺)
The life of high school is like a short but precious journey full of happiness and sorrow.(高分句式一) Here I would like to share some of my suggestions and with you.To begin with,it's important to find a proper learning method which is suitable for you.In addition,more attention should be paid to reading,which will broaden your horizons and benefit your future life.(高分句式二) Last but not least,learn to be optimistic about life,for you'll encounter many difficulties or setbacks.(描述高中生活及提出建议)
I hope you can enjoy your life and make great progress in study.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 本文属于提纲类作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
A. | calm | B. | quiet | C. | still | D. | silent |
A. | consists of | B. | is consisted of | C. | made up of | D. | consisting of |
A. | actually | B. | gradually | C. | frequently | D. | entirely |
A. | which | B. | that | C. | where | D. | what |