Question

10．假如你是高三学生李华，你的好朋友Nancy在你校的友好学校美国圣西诺高中读十二年级．你们常互通邮件，最近你们刚谈论过"中国梦"这个话题．毕业在即，她来信问你的梦想，请给她写封回信．主要内容包括：
（1）对梦想的理解　　  （2）你的人生梦想　　3．如何实现你的梦想
要求：1．词数100字左右  2．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数
Dear Nancy，
I'm glad to hear from you．Now I am writing to share you my dream．（点明写信的目的）
Our homeland dreams to restore the former glory，which inspires me to recall my dream-to become a doctor，saving lives and shouldering a burden of low-expense medical treatment for distant poor villagers．【高分句型一】（自己的人生梦想）
Being a motivation and goal，dreams make us determined，diligent and devoted as well as making life more meaningful．However，it is quite plain that obstacles cast a fierce eye on me alongside．Therefore，giving full play to strengths and minimizing weaknesses in current preparation for the entrance exam is my first challenge I am to face consciously．【高分句型二】Also，I am fully convinced that sparing no efforts to offer toil and sweat firmly and consistently will contributes a lot．（如何实现自己的梦想）
I am in curiosity about yours and reply to me soon，please．（希望知道对方的梦想）
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于梦想话题的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一点明写信的目的；二自己的人生梦想；三如何实现自己的梦想；四希望知道对方的梦想．
高分句型：
1．Our homeland dreams to restore the former glory，which inspires me to recall my dream-to become a doctor，saving lives and shouldering a burden of low-expense medical treatment for distant poor villagers．
句子里which引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句这件事；saving lives and shouldering a burden of low-expense medical treatment for distant poor villagers．是非谓语动词做伴随状语．
我们的祖国梦想是重现强国梦，这激励着我实现我的梦想，我梦想成为一个医生，挽救生命，降低边远地区村民医疗负担．
2．Therefore，giving full play to strengths and minimizing weaknesses in current preparation for the entrance exam is my first challenge I am to face consciously．句子里giving full play to strengths and minimizing weaknesses in current preparation for the entrance exam是动名词做主语；I am to face consciously是my first challenge 的定语从句．
因此，发挥强项，减小弱项，为高考做充足的准备是我现在的首要的挑战．

解答 Dear Nancy，
I'm glad to hear from you．Now I am writing to share you my dream．（点明写信的目的）
Our homeland dreams to restore the former glory，which inspires me to recall my dream-to become a doctor，saving lives and shouldering a burden of low-expense medical treatment for distant poor villagers．【高分句型一】（自己的人生梦想）
Being a motivation and goal，dreams make us determined，diligent and devoted as well as making life more meaningful．However，it is quite plain that obstacles cast a fierce eye on me alongside．Therefore，giving full play to strengths and minimizing weaknesses in current preparation for the entrance exam is my first challenge I am to face consciously．【高分句型二】Also，I am fully convinced that sparing no efforts to offer toil and sweat firmly and consistently will contributes a lot．（如何实现自己的梦想）
I am in curiosity about yours and reply to me soon，please．（希望知道对方的梦想）
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
本文采用了较高级的词汇和句型，使文章亮点多多．但是对于普通水平的学生，在高考中不主张用自己不能熟练使用的句型或词汇，用错不如不用．