Question

书面表达（满分25分）

进入高中以后，同学们的学习任务加重，对于参加课外活动，同学们有着两种不同的看法。请以After-school activities 为题，用英语写一篇120 词左右的短文。要点如下：

一些同学积极参加课外活动：学到实践知识；

另外一些同学不愿参加课外活动：学业紧；

你的观点和理由。

注意：开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。

After-school activities

When it comes to after-school activities, students hold different views…

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

After-school activities

When it comes to after-school activities, students hold different views. Some students take an active part in the activities. In their opinion, learning from textbooks is not their only task and they should take every chance to get some practical knowledge. Besides, they think they can get relaxed by participating in after-school activities after long hour’s study.

On the contrary, the other students take little interest in after-school activities. They believe that they should make full use of time to study and that after-school activities have little to do with the exams.

As far as I am concerned, I’m in favor of the first view. On the one hand, we can learn a great deal from other students through after-school activities. On the other hand, the modern society needs youths of many qualities and “bookworms” can’t keep pace with the time.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语，When it comes to当提到；take an active part in积极参加；take every chance to抓住机会做某事；On the contrary,相反；take little interest in对不感兴趣；As far as I am concerned 在我看来；In their opinion, learning from textbooks is not their only task and they should take every chance to get some practical knowledge.这个句子运用到动名词做主语；They believe that they should make full use of time to study and that after-school activities have little to do with the exams.这个句子to study做目的状语；

考点： 提纲类作文