题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你校中国功夫俱乐部(Chinese Kung Fu Club)将面向国际学生招收新成员。请你用英语写一篇招募新成员的启事,内容包括:
1.本俱乐部历史;
2.参加本俱乐部的益处;
3.本俱乐部的联系方式(邮箱chinesekungfu@126.com)。
注意:1.词数100左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear international students,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear international students,
Welcome to the Chinese Kung Fu Club! The club was set up 3 years ago with the purpose of serving all the students. Many wonderful activities have been organized and arranged in our club.
Participating in our club will benefit you a lot. You can keep fit by performing Kung Fu, during which you can have a chance to appreciate the great charm of Chinese Kung Fu culture. Besides, You can also make a lot of Chinese friends. The training on how to perform Chinese Kung Fu is open and free to all new members.
Anyone who is interested in Chinese Kung Fu is welcome. Please contact us at chinesekungfu@126.com. Look forward to your participation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则中国功夫俱乐部招新启示,面向国际学生招收新成员。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 本俱乐部历史;
2. 参加本俱乐部的益处;
3. 本俱乐部的联系方式(邮箱chinesekungfu@126.com)。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
set up;with the purpose of doing sth.;participate in;have a chance to do sth.;be interested in
第三步:连词成句
1. The club was set up 3 years ago with the purpose of serving all the students.
2. Participating in our club will benefit you a lot.
3. during which you can have a chance to appreciate the great charm of Chinese Kung Fu culture.
4. Anyone who is interested in Chinese Kung Fu is welcome.
(根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题)
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择:either…or…,or
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改