Question

假设你叫李平，你校高三同学正在开展一场讨论，讨论的主题是：高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼？请你根据下面所提供的信息，给某英语报社写一封信，介绍讨论情况。

55%的学生认为	45%的学生认为
1.应该每天进行体育锻炼	1.锻炼浪费时间
2.可以做早操、打乒乓球、打篮球，但时间不要太长	2.锻炼使人疲劳
3.锻炼能增强体质，减少疾病	3.运动以后很兴奋，较长时间不能复习功课
4.运动使大脑休息，使复习效果好	4.运动中可能会受伤

注意：信的开头已为你写好；词数100左右。

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we’ve had about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise.(作文写在背面)

                                                                             

                                                                             

Yours,

Li Ping

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we’ve had about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise. 55% of the students think they should take exercise every day, such as doing morning exercises, playing ping-pong and playing basketball, but shouldn’t take too much time. Exercise builds their bodies and reduces diseases. Sports can let their brains have a rest so that their reviewing will be more effective.

On the other hand, 45% believe taking exercise is a waste of time and it’s tiring. After having sports, they are too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons. Besides, they might get injured in sports.

Yours,

Li Ping

【解析】

试题分析：：这是一篇正反观点类议论文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。

考点：考查正反观点类议论文

点评：本文题型是考生非常熟悉的正反观点类的议论文，在平时的练习中也有相应的模板。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主，发表个人意见时使用第一人称。本文的要点均已给出，考生需要使用合适的连接词把孤立的要点联系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高级的词汇词组如 be supposed to do sth, benefit 等以提升文章的档次分。在文章红可以适当使用一至两句谚语如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高获得高分的可能性。