题目内容
请根据下面的提示写一篇题为“My New English Teacher” 的短文,可作适当发挥,词数在100左右。
李老师留给我的第一印象是年轻、漂亮、热情、有活力;
她讲授清楚,有耐心,并且总是鼓励我们,因此同学们都积极参与英语课堂。
她教我们两个多月,已经成为最受我们欢迎的老师。
在李老师的帮助下,我们一定能在英语上取得更大的进步。
My New English Teacher
Mrs Li has left a very good first impression on me. She is a beautiful young lady, enthusiastic and full of energy. Now I know that she is a really wonderful teacher. She explains everything clearly and is very patient with us. She always encourages us and avoids making us feel embarrassed even when we make mistakes, so every student is very active in her class.
So far, Mrs Li has been teaching us for only two weeks, but she has already become the most popular teacher with all of the students in our class! I am sure that we are going to learn a lot with Mrs Li teaching us.
【解析】
试题分析:本文是一篇给出汉语提示较多的记叙文。文章的难度较小,基本是按照要求翻译句子内容。成文时应注意:1.文章内容要点要齐全;(1)李老师留给我的第一印象是年轻、漂亮、热情、有活力;
(2)她讲授清楚,有耐心,并且总是鼓励我们,因此同学们都积极参与英语课堂。(3)她教我们两个多月,已经成为最受我们欢迎的老师。(4) 在李老师的帮助下,我们一定能在英语上取得更大的进步。2.人称:使用第三人称为主;3.时态:一般现在时;4.注意使用一些连词或插入语使文章表达自然、流畅;5.使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型,以提高文章的档次。
【亮点说明】使用了从句:She always encourages us and avoids making us feel embarrassed even when we make mistakes, so every student is very active in her class. I am sure that we are going to learn a lot with Mrs Li teaching us. 插入语So far。
考点:考查学生语言综合运用能力。
第一节 基础写作 (共1小题,满分15分)
俗话说”笑一笑,十年少”,请根据下面的提示写一篇短文,谈谈微笑的好处。
[写作内容]
1.微笑的好处:给别人留下好印象;帮自己调节不良情绪 2.具体的事例:聊天时向朋友倾诉苦恼,朋友给我发来了他的一张面带灿烂笑容的照片,朋友的微笑消除了自己的烦恼。 3.你猜想经常微笑会有什么好处? |
[写作要求] 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
[评分标准] 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。