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2．如今旅游成为了人们放松休闲的一种方式，但是同时出现了一些不文明的行为，比如乱涂乱画，乱扔垃圾等．请你就这种不文明现象写一篇发言稿．内容应包括：
1．游客的一些不文明的行为；
2．树立良好形象，从我做起；
3．增强环保意识，制止不文明行为．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅．
参考词汇：不文明行为uncivilized behavior   刻画 scratch
How Can We Behave Well in School？
Recently there exists some uncivilized behavior in our school．Some students spit in public．Other students like to play on the grass，regardless of the warning．What makes me ashamed is that some students show no respect for their teachers even in class．
All the above behavior is of no good to build a friendly and harmonious school．There is no doubt that it is to blame．As we know，every effort，however small，will make a difference．
The school is out home．We should form good habit and raise the awareness of civilized behavior．For example，we can put the waste paper in the dustbin，wait in the queue in the dinning room，and try to be honest in the exams．When we do something wrong，we must be brave to admit what we have done and correct it in time．Let's take action from now on．．

Answer 1

分析 （高级句型一）What makes me ashamed is that some students show no respect for their teachers even in class．
该句型使用了what makes me引导的主语从句，意思是使我羞愧的是…；that引导一个表语从句；
（高级句型二）When we do something wrong，we must be brave to admit what we have done and correct it in time．
首先when引导时间状语从句；admit后what引导一个宾语从句，意思是我们要勇敢承认我所做的…‘
高级词汇：be of no good 固定句型，没有好处；harmonious和谐的；raise the awareness 增强…的 意识；make a difference有意义；take action 采取行动；

解答 How Can We Behave Well in School？
      （列举不文明现象）Recently there exists some uncivilized behavior in our school．Some students spit in public．Other students like to play on the grass，regardless of the warning．（高级句型一）What makes me ashamed is that some students show no respect for their teachers even in class．
    All the above behavior is of no good to build a friendly and harmonious school．There is no doubt that it is to blame．As we know，every effort，however small，will make a difference．
     （给出适当建议）The school is out home．We should form good habit and raise the awareness of civilized behavior．For example，we can put the waste paper in the dustbin，wait in the queue in the dinning room，and try to be honest in the exams．（高级句型二）When we do something wrong，we must be brave to admit what we have done and correct it in time．Let's take action from now on．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．