题目内容
大多数人都希望受到别人欢迎，但并非都能做到。请根据下表问卷调查结果，写一篇题为How to be popular的英文短文。
45%的人认为 | 1、改善外表，穿着得体，精神状态好 2、经常微笑，待人友善 |
55%的人认为 | 1、培养对他人的体贴 2、当个好听众 |
自己的观点 | (至少两点) |
注意：1、短文须包括所有要点，可适度发挥。
2、开头已为你写好，但不计人总词数。
3、词数：100-120
How to be popular
Many people desire to be popular with others, but not everyone can achieve this goal．What is the secret to popularity?
How to be popular
Most people desire to be popular with others, but not everyone can achieve this goal. What is the secret to popularity?
45 percent of the people surveyed believe that the first step is to improve our appearance. We should always make sure that we dress properly and be in good spirits. In addition, if we always keep a smile on our face and act in a friendly way towards others, people will be attracted to our good looks and impressed by our actions.
However, 55% of the people think a person popular with people is always considerate of others. It’s also important to be a good listener. In this way, people will feel comfortable enough to get along with you.
In my opinion, no matter what we do, we are supposed to be ourselves. Only by being respectful of others can we earn their respect. Meanwhile, if we are trustworthy, I am sure popularity will come our way.
【解析】
该作文是给材料作文，考生在反映出需要表达的事情的同时，注意语言的使用。注意条理要清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，同时要尽量保持简洁精干的内容，不拖泥带水。要注意题中所给的信息，不可偏题，可以适当进行发挥，同时也不要忘记提出自己的观点。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。时态：一般现在时。结构：总分。使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。
【亮点说明】文章第一段是文章的中心段。第一句Most people desire to be popular with others大多数人们都想要收到别人欢迎，其中连用了两个句型desire to do something想要做某事、be popular with somebody受到某人的欢迎。 文章第二段第三段阐述调查结果。第二段第一句45 percent of the people surveyed believe that the first step is to improve our appearance.调查中的百分之45人相信第一步是改进我们的形象。这是一个that引导的宾语从句，that做believe的宾语。第二句We should always make sure that we dress properly and be in good spirits. 我们应该确定我们衣着得体精神饱满。这也是一个that引导的宾语从句，that做make sure的宾语。第三句用了一个条件状语从句：if we always keep a smile on our face and act in a friendly way towards others, people will be attracted to our good looks and impressed by our actions.如果我们的脸上总是保持笑容，我们的行为很友好，人们会被我们美好的外表和优雅的行动所吸引。其中主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时。第四段提出自己的观点。第一句no matter what we do不管我们做什么,这是一个让步状语从句，no matter what相当于whatever。第二句Only by being respectful of others can we earn their respect. 这里是only提前的倒装句。只有对别人尊重我们才能赢得他人的尊重。最后一句也是一个if引导的条件状语从句。本文中也运用了大量的高级短语make sure 保证、be attracted to be 被吸引、considerate of体谅、It’s important to do。做某事很重要、get along with和…相处、be supposed to被期望…等。同时在文章结构上，作者用了很多连词，比如第二段的In addition,此外用于阐述新观点。第三段However,用于引出反面观点In this way,起顺承的作用。最后一段 In my opinion,引出自己的观点。Meanwhile与此同时。本文运用了大量的从句和短语，连词用的恰到好处。
考点：考察应用文写作
