Question

【题目】书面表达

假定你是李华，最近你在一个国外的青少年网站里看到一个寻求帮助的帖子，内容如下：

Hi there，

I'm 15 years old and I don't know what kind of career I should pursue. And I'm starting to worry about it.

My school is competitive. Competing with my classmates， I'm under great pressure. In order to get high grades， I have to try so hard that I feel very tired all the time. Gradually， I lose interest in study， and I even fall asleep when studying.

Is there anyone who has experienced the same kind of problem and is willing to help me？

Thank you！

Depressed Maggie

请你根据帖子的内容，写一篇英语短文进行回复。

要求：1.针对发帖人遇到的问题提出建议，并给予鼓励；

2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

3.词数100左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Maggie，

I used to have the same problem as you. Therefore，I am writing to you to express my views.

In my opinion，first of all，be confident and believe yourself，for confidence can make you study easier. Secondly，each night before you go to bed，a list of everything that you need to do the next day is supposed to be made clearly. Not only does it help you become organized，but also it can reduce pressure，helping you get a good rest. What's more，you'd better make plans for the things you want to achieve. As long as your plans are reasonable and practical， they will end up making you more productive. Last but not least， you can get some help from your teachers and friends as well once you meet great difficulties. It's a good way to set some time aside for yourself to be with your friends.

I hope these suggestions can be of great help.

Best regards！

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文要求根据一个国外的青少年网站里看到一个寻求帮助的帖子，写一篇英语短文进行回复。要点包括：针对发帖人遇到的问题提出建议，并给予鼓励；适当增加细节以使行文连贯。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：定语从句that you need to do the next day；you want to achieve.倒装句Not only does it help you become organized，but also it can reduce pressure。非谓语动词helping you get a good rest. It 的用法It's a good way to set some time aside for yourself to be with your friends. In my opinion，supposed to，As long as，be of great help.等词汇及first of all，What's more，Last but not least等连接词。