Question

假如你们将举办新年晚会， 现请你以学生会的名义写一封邀请信， 邀请在你校工作的外籍教师Mr.Green 来参加。有关内容如下：

1．晚会时间：下周五晚7：00—9：00。

2．晚会的地点：学校礼堂。

3．晚会节目：本校师生表演的中国传统民歌、舞蹈，中国乐器演奏及话剧小品等。

4．希望Mr. Green 届时也能表演一个精彩节目。

提示的词语：以学生会名义：  on behalf of the Students’ Union

话剧小品：   short plays of traditional style

写作要求：

1 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

2.信的格式开头和结尾已经写出。

Dear Mr.Green,

_______________________________________________________________________________

We do look forward eagerly to your participation..

Yours,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

A possible version

On behalf of the Students’ Union, I am writing this letter to invite you to participate in our New Year Evening Party. The party is going to be held in the school meeting hall from 7:00 to 9:00 p.m. next Friday. Many wonderful performances presented by the teachers and students in our school, will be shown on the stage, such as the Chinese folk songs and dances, Chinese musical instruments, short plays of traditional style and so on. So it will surely offer you a good opportunity to obtain a clear picture of Chinese traditional culture. We should be very glad if you could come, and meanwhile, our evening party would be more cheerful if you could also deliver a performance.

【解析】本文是一封邀请函。邀请Mr.Green来参加新年晚会，在这封信中一定要把与新年晚会有关的所有信息都包括在内，不能有遗漏。在表达的时候力求简洁，准确。可以选择使用一些高级词汇如opportunity等，也要使用一些合适的连接词如meanwhile，让文章更有条理，更流畅。