Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Zhuge liang, who was born in a wealthy family in Han Dynasty, is better known at home and abroad for his wisdom and devotion.

His parents died in his childhood, make him an orphan. He experienced many difficulties in his youth. Fortunate, his passion for study made him the most knowledgeable in his time. It is said that he joined in Liu Bei after Liu visited him in person three times. He persuade Liu to unite Sun Quan to battle against Cao Cao. His efforts paid off at last. Under his help, Liu Bei founded the Kingdom of Shu. What's more, Zhuge Liang made a lot of invention. Among them are Kongming lantern, that is still in use for entertainment.

Nowadays, Zhuge Liang is remembered as not only an important strategist (军事家)and politician but also a famous inventor.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】in Han Dynasty在in后加the

【2】better---well

【3】make--making

【4】Fortunate --- Fortunately

【5】joined in 去in

【6】persuade – persuaded

【7】Under his help --- With

【8】invention --- inventions

【9】Among them are Kongming lantern --- is

【10】that --- which

【解析】

试题分析：本文介绍汉代军事家、政治家和发明家诸葛亮。

【1】in Han Dynasty在in后加the 专用名词：the Han Dynasty汉代，故in Han Dynasty在in后加the。

【2】better---well 此处无比较的意思，“诸葛亮在国内外闻名”。故把better---well。

【3】make—making 现在分词作自然的结果状语，故把make—making。

【4】Fortunate --- Fortunately 副词修饰整个句子，故把Fortunate --- Fortunately。

【5】joined in 去in join+某人/某个组织，加入---成为其中的一员。故joined in 去in。

【6】persuade – persuaded 根据句意可知在讲过去的事，用一般过去时态，故把persuade – persuaded。

【7】Under his help --- With 固定词组：with the help of 在---的帮助下，故把Under his help --- With。

【8】invention --- inventions 句意：许多发明。用名词复数，故把invention --- inventions。

【9】Among them are Kongming lantern --- is 这是一个全部倒装，主语是Kongming lantern，故把Among them are Kongming lantern --- is。

【10】that --- which 此处是非限制性定语从句，故把that --- which。