Question

【题目】假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。

1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；

2.学会做人：真诚，友善；

3.学会其他：考生自拟。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总字数。

Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.

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Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.

In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.

In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.

Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.

No pains no gains, I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.

Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于演讲稿写作，写作时注意以下几点：1. 应该使用第一人称。全文以现在以及将来范畴的时态为主，当然不排斥用过去时态。2. 按提纲提示清晰分段，不能缺少要点。3.注意语言逻辑性和思维想象力，多用些语际衔接性词语。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，没有缺少要点，而且使用了多种句式和衔接性词语。比如Firstly，In addition，Finally，串联全文。同时运用高级句型，如 Developing a good habit is also of importance. 是动名词短语作主语，review what had been taught after class. 和I am sure that with great efforts, you will是名词性从句，It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. 是强调句。词汇丰富多变，如Challenging，build up，get actively involved in，No pains no gains，get along well with。