Question

假如你是高一新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms李希望了解每位学生的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。

1.对英语学习的认识；

2.自己目前的英语水平；

3.自己学习英语存在的问题；

4.对英语教学点的两点建议。

     注意：1. 词数100 左右。

           2.信的开头和结尾已经给出。

                

 Dear Ms Li,

     I am happy to have you as our English teacher.                                                              

                                                                   

                                                                     

                                                                     

                                                                     

                                                                     

                                                                     

                                                                     

                                                                     

                                                                     

Thank you!

                                         Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Ms Li,

I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.

As the world is becoming a global village,English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.

My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another question is to give us more chances to practice speaking English. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.

Thank you!                    Li Hua

 

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇书信文体的写作，题意和要点简单，考生应不难理解写作要求和写作目的，考生重点要先仔细审题，审题主要包括以下几个方面：（1）主体时态；（2）主体人称；（3）内容要点。尤其是对于内容要点的把握要准确到位。再者考生需注意尽可能使句子表达形式的多样，尽量使用一些较复杂的句式结构和较高级的词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。

考点：应用文中书信类文体

点评：对于应用文写作要简洁明了，直入主题。例文中首先就陈述自己为英语学习的认识，运用连词as引导从句，动名词短语作主语。文章中运用定语从句，名词性从句，非谓语动词等高级语法结构。全文行文简洁流畅。