题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It doesn’t matter to fail as long as you don’t give up. To my opinion, it is hard to be successful. Challenges were a necessary part of your life as you grow up. And you won’t necessary succeed in everything for the first time you try. That’s okay. Some of the most successful people in the world are the one who’ve had the most failures. J. K. Rowling, wrote Harry Potter, had her first Harry Potter book reject 12 times before it was finally published. Michael Jordan was removed his high school basketball team. He lost hundreds of games and miss thousands of shots during his career. But he once said, “I have failed over and over and over again in my life. And that’s because I succeed.”
【答案】
【解析】试题分析:本文主要是通过列举一些例子告诉我们失败不可怕,只要我们永不放弃玖一定会成功的。
【1】To –In考查固定搭配。In my opinion在我看来。在我看来,成功是很难的。故To –In
【2】were –are考查be动词。全文用的是一般现在时态,所以be动词用一般现在时形式。当你长大的过程中,挑战是你生活中必不可少的一部分。故were –are
【3】necessary – necessarily考查副词。修饰动词succeed用副词。当你第一次尝试的时候,你没有必要一切都要成功。故necessary – necessarily
【4】for去掉,考查连词。此处the first time 表“第一次”,与“第二次、第三次......”对立,相当于一个从属连词,用于过去式或现在时。当你第一次尝试的时候,你没有必要一切都要成功。故for去掉
【5】one – ones考查名词单复数。前面Some of the most successful people是复数,故此处应用复数ones,世界上有一些最成功的人就是曾经最失败的人。故one – ones
【6】wrote Harry Potter前加who考查引导词。此处是who引导的定语从句。写哈利·波特的J.K.罗琳,,故wrote Harry Potter前加who
【7】was去掉,考查动词。此处是一个完整的句子,前面已经有had做谓语了,故was去掉。她第一本哈利·波特的书被拒绝了12次才最终出版。故was去掉
【8】removed 后加from考查介词。removed from开除,除名。迈克尔乔丹被他的高中篮球队除名了。故removed 后加from
【9】miss-missed考查动词。并列句前后时态一致,前半句是过去时态,后半句也应是过去时态,故动词用过去式。他在职业生涯中输了几百场比赛,错过了上千次的射门。故miss-missed
【10】because –why考查引导词。此处是强调结果的表语从句,故引导词用why,because用于强调原因。故because –why
【学法指导】
在短文改错中常出现的错误主要有以下几类:
1. 名词单复数用错,可数与不可数名词的混用。比如第5句,前面Some of the most successful people是复数,故此处应用复数ones,世界上有一些最成功的人就是曾经最失败的人。故one – ones
2. 动词:时态和语态,常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时,中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象;或是及物动词后无宾语,或是不及物动词后加了宾语;需要接ing形式的接了to,或相反等。比如倒数第2句,He lost hundreds of games and miss thousands of shots during his career.考查动词。并列句前后时态一致,前半句是过去时态,后半句也应是过去时态,故动词用过去式。他在职业生涯中输了几百场比赛,错过了上千次的射门。故miss-missed
3. 形容词副词:常出现需形容词的地方用了副词或相反;关系副词where, when, why等的缺失或错用。比如第3句And you won't necessary succeed in everything for the first time you try.考查副词。修饰动词succeed用副词。当你第一次尝试的时候,你没有必要一切都要成功。故necessary – necessarily
4. 介词:主要是介词的多余或缺失,错用。比如倒数第3句Michael Jordan was removed his high school basketball team.考查介词。removed from开除,除名。迈克尔乔丹被他的高中篮球队除名了。故removed 后加from
5. 主谓一致性:第三人称单数漏掉s,或主语为复数,谓语动词用了单数;再就是就近原则对主语的影响。
6. 冠词:定冠词the的多余或缺失,如节日,季节,月份,星期,球类及三餐活动,称呼头衔前等不能加the的地方加了the。
7. 数词:主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用。
8. 连词:不合句中的逻辑关系。
9. 代词:主要是代词的格与数的错用。如男性用了女性代词,单数用了复数代词或相反;应当用形容词性的物主代词用了宾格,主格或相反,关系代词的错用或缺失。
10. 常用固定短语或固定用法及句型用错。比如第2句,To my opinion, it is hard to be successful. 考查固定搭配。In my opinion在我看来。在我看来,成功是很难的。故To –In
【题目】
The Penguins Skipper and his fellow penguins were originally just supporting roles in animated film Madagascar (2005). But in 2008 they took leading roles in their own TV series, and in 2014 starred in the film Penguins of Madagascar. The penguins’ wisdom and humor not only appeal to kids, but also serve adult audiences well. So, it’s not surprising that they get their own movie. |
Scrat A small and furry squirrel with a long tail from animated movie Ice Age (2002), Scrat played a supporting role but has won the hearts of both children and grown-ups with his persistence(毅力). In the film, his chasing after his prized acorn(橡子) causes an Earth-shattering geological event. Scrat is a big part in the lasting attraction of the movie series Ice Age. Today, Scrat has his own animated mini-movies. |
Puss in Boots Originally a fairy tale written by French author Charles Perrault, Puss in Boots features a cat that helps his low-born master gain wealth and power through trickery(哄骗). The cat later appeared as a supporting role in Shrek 2 (2004), Shrek 3 (2007) and Shrek 4 (2010). In 2011, he had his own movie titled Puss in Boots. His lovable and funny characteristics easily break the boundaries between different ages of audiences. |
【1】What can we learn from the passage?
A. Scrat contributes a lot to the movie series Ice Age.
B. Scrat won children’s hearts by playing with his acorn.
C. Skipper took a leading role in Madagascar (2005).
D. Puss in Boots(2011) features a cat helping poor people.
【2】What is the similarity among these animated characters?
A. They used to play leading roles successfully.
B. All of them have starred in their own movies.
C. They won their popularity through trickery.
D. Only children show great affection for them.