Question

12．假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的外教Huson写一封信，邀请他作为演讲比赛的评委，并请他在赛后给参赛学生指导如何演讲．
NOTICE
English Speech Contest
Theme：opportunities often come disguised as hard work
Time：16：30～18：00，28^th August
Place：the Academic Hall
注意：
1、词数100左右：
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：
3、开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封邀请信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称，时态以一般将来时表示比赛安排为主．内容包括：一点明书信目的；二比赛的主题，时间和地点；三对方在比赛的工作；四表示感激．
高分句型：
1．It will be held from 16：30 to 18：00 on 28^th August in Academic Hall，where you often give us lectures．句子里where引导非限制性定语从句，先行词是Academic Hall．
比赛将会在八月二十八日的下午四点半到六点在学术大厅举行，那是你经常做演讲的地方．
2．Since your lectures have been gaining great popularity among students，I'm fully convinced that your presence as a judge will surely make both the participants and audience happy．句子里Since引导原因状语从句，表示"因为"；have been gaining 是现在完成进行时；I'm fully convinced 表示"我完全相信"．
因为你的演讲一直受到学生的欢迎，所以我完全相信，你作为裁判出现肯定会让参赛者和观众高兴．

解答 Dear Huson，
I'm writing to sincerely invite you to take part in the coming English Speech Contest in our school next week as a judge．（点明书信目的）
The contest，with the theme of"opportunities often come disguised as hard work"this year，is an annual activity of our school．It will be held from 16：30 to 18：00 on 28^th August in Academic Hall，where you often give us lectures．【高分句型一】（比赛的主题，时间和地点）Since your lectures have been gaining great popularity among students，I'm fully convinced that your presence as a judge will surely make both the participants and audience happy．【高分句型二】By the way，I also hope you can spare some time to instruct the participants how to deliver a successful speech．（对方在比赛的工作）
I'd really appreciate it if you can accept my invitation．I'm looking forward to your reply．（表示感激）
Yours Sincerely，
                                                                                                                     Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
提纲类作文一般给出的要点比较多，这就要求我们在写作时不用遗漏任何的要点，无论是汉语的提示还是英文的，同时如果题目要求要有自己的发挥，那么也要有所体现．这些要点是阅卷老师的关注重点．