题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是中学生李华,你收到正在学习汉语的美国笔友Peter的电子邮件,说他在汉语学习中遇到了困难,感到非常着急。请根据以下要点给他回信并提出建议,帮他来解决这方面的困难。
1.不要担忧,要有信心。
2.给自己更多练习汉语的机会。
3.让自己浸泡在汉语的环境当中。
要求:1.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 2.词数:100词左右。
3. 邮件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I have received your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I have received your letter.I’m sorry to hear that you are going through a hard time learning Chinese. Now I’m writing to give you some suggestions.
To begin with, don’t be anxious and trust yourself. Chinese is one of the most complex languages in the world, so it’s normal for a beginner to have some trouble. Besides, grab every opportunity to practice using the language. The more you practice, the more fluent you will be in it. Above all, involve yourself in a Chinese environment. Make sure that you are surrounded by books and TV programs in Chinese, and by friends speaking Chinese, which is essential to the learning of any language.
Looking forward to your improvement soon.
【解析】
试题分析:
本文要求写一封信给美国笔友Peter,内容包括两方面:安慰Peter不要担心汉语学习中遇到的困难以及给Peter提出建议帮助他解决难题。写作时注意以下几点:1.涵盖所有内容。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时,以第一人称为主。3、注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】
文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色,如one of the most complex languages最复杂的语言之一;it’s normal for a beginner to have some trouble。初学者遇到麻烦很正常;The more you practice, the more fluent you will be in it.你练习的越多,你就会越流利;which is essential to the learning of any language. which引导的非限制性定语从句;还有To begin with,Besides, Above all等有效地使语句间连接紧凑。