Question

高中生活既新鲜又忙碌。假如你是Anna，你的初中同学Sam来信询问你的课余生活是怎样度过的。请你根据下面图表的提示，回一封信给他，并阐述你这样做的理由。

注意：

1. 可参照图表内容及文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥。

2. 词数150左右，信的开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。

3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

参考词汇：

after-school life 课余生活；

tidy the dormitory 整理宿舍

Dear Sam,

How time flies! I do miss you and other former friends.

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Love,

Anna

Answer 1

Dear Sam,

How time flies! I do miss you and other former friends. I’m very excited to receive your letter and I’d like to tell you about my after-school life.

After a period of time, I’m now used to my high school life, though it was a bit challenging for me at first. Usually, I spend forty-one percent of my spare time on sports, mainly badminton and basketball. I also like reading books that have something to do with literature. So reading takes up twenty percent of my spare time. And another thirty percent of my spare time is spent in tidying my dormitory, such as cleaning the windows, arranging the books on the shelves and so on. For the rest of the time, I make use of it to do some other things, for example, sometimes I do some shopping with my classmates.

All in all, high school is much more than just study. It is a time of discovery, learning and hard work!

Love,

Anna

【解析】给材料应用型作文注意要求文体的格式，条理要清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，同时要尽量保持简洁精干的内容，不拖泥带水。要注意题中所给的信息，不可遗漏，适当添加一些语句使得文章丰满起来，应用文写作对于文章内容的要求是要达到写作目的。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性，多使用连接词。时态：一般现在时。结构上：可采取总分模式。

【亮点说明】第一段第一句How time flies固定句型，意思为时光飞逝。第二句I do miss you and other former friends.我确实很想念你一起其他的老友。Do在句子中起强调作用。第三句使用了would like的缩略形式，意思不变，是一种委婉的说法。第二段 After a period of time, 一段时间之后，第一句I’m now used to my high school life,be used to 是固定短语，表示习惯了某事物。第三局 I also like reading books that have something to do with literature.我也喜欢读一些与文学有关的书。这里用到了一个定语从句，关系代词that修饰先行词，后面的小句做定语修饰books。 第五句And another thirty percent of my spare time is spent in tidying my dormitory, such as cleaning the windows, arranging the books on the shelves and so on.我闲暇时间剩下的百分之30用于清洁公寓，例如擦窗户，排书架等等。这里前半句有一个固定搭配spend sometime in doing something。Such as后面的cleaning和arranging与前面的tidying都是一系列的动作，时态保持一致。 整篇书信中用了不少的连接词，使得文章的连贯性很好第一段的How time flies!第二段After a period of time,、Usually、 so 、such as、 for example，以及最后一段的All in all（总而言之）都是很好的词，在作文中可以适当多加使用。书信的写作要注意格式，通常正式的书信写作格式有好几种，本文使用的是最常见的书信格式，抬头左上角，落款右下。

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