假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误.每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧).并在此符号下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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10．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Maria，a 91-year-old woman，has an unbelievable experience last week．A group of thieves
broke to her house but took nothing away with them．Maria remembered that the windows were broken and all her box were opened，but nothing was missing．Instead，she found a handwritten note that was said，"This is help you get by"．Beside the note there was some money．It seemed that the thieves realized how poor Maria lived and derided not to take something-but to help．
One policeman who has been working for 40years is surprising by this event too．Later Maria framed the note received from her friendly thieves but used the money to buy sweets for his great grandchildren．

分析玛利亚，一位九十一岁的老太太，上周经历了一件不可思议的事．一群盗贼闯入她家但什么都没拿走．玛利亚记得窗户打破了，所有的盒子都被打开了，但一样东西都没丢．相反，她发现了一张便条，旁边有些钱，便条上面写着：这是帮助你的钱．看起来应该是盗贼觉得她过得太寒酸了．一位工作了四十年的警察也对此事大为惊叹．后来，玛利亚给这张便条做了一个相框，用那些钱给她曾孙买了糖果．

解答 Maria，a 91-year-old woman，has an unbelievable experience last week．
                                             had
A group of thieves broke to her house but took nothing away with them．
                                    into
Maria remembered that the windows were broken and all her box were opened，
                                                                                        boxes
but nothing was missing．Instead，she found a handwritten note that was said，
                                                                                                     去掉
"This is∧help you get by"．Beside the note there was some money．
            加to
It seemed that the thieves realized how poor Maria lived and derided not to take something-but to help．
                                                         poorly                                                  anything
One policeman who has been working for 40years is surprising by this event too．
                                                                            surprised
Later Maria framed the note received from her friendly thieves but used the money to buy sweets for his great grandchildren．
                                                                                           and                                                   her
1．has改为had．文章讲述的是上周的事情，要用一般过去时态．
2．to改为into．短语搭配，break into闯入．
3．box改为boxes．句意表达的是复数，所有的盒子．
4．was去掉．固定表达法，上面写着什么，英语中用主动不用被动．
5．加to．句中系动词后接不定式作表语，系动词后不能直接接动词原形．
6．poor改为poorly．句中修饰的是动词lived，要用副词．
7．something改为anything．否定句中用anything．
8．surprising改为surprised．句意表达的是警察的感受，要用过去分词，现在分词表示事物的特征．
9．but改为and．句意表达的是承接，不是转折．
10．his改为her．逻辑指代错误，句意指代的是这位老太太．

点评短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．