题目内容

西藏是中国领土不可分割的一部分，这块具有神秘和传奇色彩的土地也引起了世界的关注。

假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter打算今年暑假来中国西藏旅游，请你根据下表内容用英语向他简单地介绍有关西藏的一些基本情况。

[写作内容] 

归属

中华人民共和国

地理位置

中国西南方，被誉为世界屋脊（Roof of the World）

人口

约2,800,000

面积

120多万平方公里

省会

拉萨(Lhasa)，被誉为世界上最高的城市

特征

700多年的悠久历史；有很多享誉海内外的名胜，如布达拉宫the Potala Palace。

发展

1951年5月23日解放(liberation)以来，西藏在政治、经济、文化等方面都取得了很大的进步。

 [写作要求]

1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

2．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入句子总数。

Dear Peter．

I am so glad to know that you will come to Tibet for a visit.

                                                                              

                                                                               I'm sure you will have a wonderful journey in such a great land.

Looking forward to your coming to China．

Yours，

LiHua

 

【答案】

Dear Peter，

I am so glad to know that you will come to Tibet for a visit．

Tibet，known as the“Roof of the World”，belongs to the People’s Republic of China and it is located in the southwest of China. It has a population of about 2.8 million，covering more than 1.2 million square kilometers. The capital city is Lhasa, which is honored as“the highest city”in the world. With a long history of more than 700 years, Tibet has a number of world-famous places of interest, such as the Potala Palace. Since the liberation of Tibet on May 23，1951，it has witnessed significant progress in politics, economy and culture. I'm sure you will have a wonderful Journey in such a great land.

 Looking forward to your coming to China．

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要仔细审题，这是话题作文，要点已经给出，需要考生正确表达，写作难度不大。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。因为只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。又要包括所有的要点，考生要多使用复杂句，一句话中多包含些信息，如范文里面的句子：The capital city is Lhasa, which is honored as“the highest city”in the world..就包含了几个要点内容。也出现了非限制性定语从句的句子。

考点：提纲作文

点评：作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合作文要求，句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色，使用高级词汇及句型。

 

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西藏是中国领土不可分割的一部分，这块具有神秘和传奇色彩的土地也引起了世界的关注。
假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter打算今年暑假来中国西藏旅游，请你根据下表内容用英语向他简单地介绍有关西藏的一些基本情况。
[写作内容] 

归属
中华人民共和国
地理位置
中国西南方，被誉为世界屋脊（Roof of the World）
人口
约2,800,000
面积
120多万平方公里
省会
拉萨(Lhasa)，被誉为世界上最高的城市
特征
700多年的悠久历史；有很多享誉海内外的名胜，如布达拉宫the Potala Palace。
发展
1951年5月23日解放(liberation)以来，西藏在政治、经济、文化等方面都取得了很大的进步。
 [写作要求]
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入句子总数。
Dear Peter．
I am so glad to know that you will come to Tibet for a visit.
                                                                              
                                                                               I'm sure you will have a wonderful journey in such a great land.
Looking forward to your coming to China．
Yours，
LiHua

 

第二节 读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150左右的英语短文。

On September 1, 1965, the Tibet Autonomous Region was officially established, which marked the establishment of the people's democratic power in Tibet. From then on, the Tibetan people enjoyed the right to administer their own affairs and, together with the people throughout the country, engaged in the socialist development. Nowadays, the Tibet Autonomous Region, covering one-eighth of China's territory with a population of 2.8 million, has developed rapidly in recent years.

China is a multi-ethnic country and Tibet is an inalienable(不可分割的) part of China. For more than 700 years the central government of China has continuously exercised sovereignty over Tibet. No government of any country in the world has ever recognized Tibet as an independent state. Anyone must be denounced(谴责) if he tries to split his motherland. British Foreign Secretary Lord Lansdowne, in a formal instruction in 1904, called Tibet "a province of the Chinese Empire." In his speech, Indian Prime Minister Jawaharlal Nehru said, "Over the past several hundred years, as far as I know, at no time has any foreign country denied China's sovereignty over Tibet." The Dalai clique and overseas anti-China forces used to claim that between the 1911 Revolution and the founding of the People's Republic of China in 1949, Tibet became a country "exercising full authority." However, many historical facts denied such a fallacy(谬论). The so-called "Tibetan independence" which the Dalai clique and overseas anti-China forces spread is nothing but a fiction of the imperialists who committed aggression against China in modern history. Never will they succeed.

[写作内容]

1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点。

2. 然后以约120个词就 “西藏是中国领土不可分割的一部分” 的主题发表看法，并包括如下要点：

         (1) 自古以来，西藏就是中国的领土，西藏历史源远流长；

(2) 在中央政府的大力支持下，西藏在经济、政治、文化等方面都得到了很好的发展；

(3) 达赖分裂祖国的行为必将受到热爱和平的中国人民和全世界华人的强烈谴责；

         (4) 作为中学生，你认为该怎么做？

[写作要求]

(1) 可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点， 也可以参照阅读材料的

内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

(2) 标题自定。

[评分标准]                概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

 

第二节 读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150左右的英语短文。

On September 1, 1965, the Tibet Autonomous Region was officially established, which marked the establishment of the people's democratic power in Tibet. From then on, the Tibetan people enjoyed the right to administer their own affairs and, together with the people throughout the country, engaged in the socialist development. Nowadays, the Tibet Autonomous Region, covering one-eighth of China's territory with a population of 2.8 million, has developed rapidly in recent years.

China is a multi-ethnic country and Tibet is an inalienable(不可分割的) part of China. For more than 700 years the central government of China has continuously exercised sovereignty over Tibet. No government of any country in the world has ever recognized Tibet as an independent state. Anyone must be denounced(谴责) if he tries to split his motherland. British Foreign Secretary Lord Lansdowne, in a formal instruction in 1904, called Tibet "a province of the Chinese Empire." In his speech, Indian Prime Minister Jawaharlal Nehru said, "Over the past several hundred years, as far as I know, at no time has any foreign country denied China's sovereignty over Tibet." The Dalai clique and overseas anti-China forces used to claim that between the 1911 Revolution and the founding of the People's Republic of China in 1949, Tibet became a country "exercising full authority." However, many historical facts denied such a fallacy(谬论). The so-called "Tibetan independence" which the Dalai clique and overseas anti-China forces spread is nothing but a fiction of the imperialists who committed aggression against China in modern history. Never will they succeed.

[写作内容]

1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点。

2. 然后以约120个词就 “西藏是中国领土不可分割的一部分” 的主题发表看法，并包括如下要点：

       (1) 自古以来，西藏就是中国的领土，西藏历史源远流长；

(2) 在中央政府的大力支持下，西藏在经济、政治、文化等方面都得到了很好的发展；

(3) 达赖分裂祖国的行为必将受到热爱和平的中国人民和全世界华人的强烈谴责；

       (4) 作为中学生，你认为该怎么做？

[写作要求]

(1) 可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点， 也可以参照阅读材料的

内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

(2) 标题自定。

[评分标准]            概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

西藏是中国领土不可分割的一部分，这块具有神秘和传奇色彩的土地也引起了世界的关注。 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter打算今年暑假来中国西藏旅游，请你根据下表内容甩英语向他简单地介绍有关西藏的一些基本情况。

  [写作内容] 

归属

中华人民共和国

地理位置

中国西南方，被誉为世界屋脊（Roof of the world）

人口

约2,800,000

面积

120多万平方公里

省会

拉萨（Lhasa），被誉为世界上最高的城市

特征

700多年的悠久历史；风景秀丽．有很多享誉海内外的名胜古迹，如布达拉宫。

发展

1951年5月23日解放以来，西藏在政治、经济（economy）、文化等方面都取得了很大的进步。

    [写作要求]

    1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

    2．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入句子总数；

3．参考词汇：领土territory布达拉宫the Potala Palace经济（economy）西藏自治区the Tibet Autonomous Region

    [评分标准]

    句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

Dear Peter．

  I am so glad to know that you will come to Tibet for a visit. ．

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                               

                                                                              

Looking forward to your coming to China．Have a wonderful journey in Tibet!

    Yours，

                                                                         Li Hua

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