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16.手机给我们带来很多便利的同时也带来了越来越多的"低头族",请你描述这种现象及其危害;并发表你的看法.
注意:1.词数:120左右.
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
3.低头族phubbers,低头族现象phubbing.
Mobile phones bring us much convenience and has become part of our life.However,more and more phubbers,especially young people,would like to stare at their screen anytime and anywhere,whethe r they are riding on a bus,eating at dinner tables or walking across the street.They never care about what happens around.
As far as I am concerned,the habit of phubbing has many disadvantages.First,it does harm to people's health,especially their eyes.Besides,phubbing is also dangerous while people are crossing the street.What's more,in some occasions,such as at dinner table,phubbing seems impolite to others.
In a word,people should make good use of mobile phones instead of becoming addicted to phubbing.

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
However,more and more phubbers,especially young people,would like to stare at their screen anytime and anywhere,whethe r they are riding on a bus,eating at dinner tables or walking across the street
然而,越来越多的人,尤其是年轻人,要盯住屏幕随时随地的,不管他们是乘公共汽车,吃在餐桌上或走在街上.
高分句型二:
In a word,people should make good use of mobile phones instead of becoming addicted to phubbing.
总之,人们应该利用好手机而不是沉迷于手机.

解答 Mobile phones bring us much convenience and has become part of our life.However,more and more phubbers,especially young people,would like to stare at their screen anytime and anywhere,whethe r they are riding on a bus,eating at dinner tables or walking across the street(高分句型一).They never care about what happens around.
As far as I am concerned,the habit of phubbing has many disadvantages.First,it does harm to people's health,especially their eyes.Besides,phubbing is also dangerous while people are crossing the street.What's more,in some occasions,such as at dinner table,phubbing seems impolite to others.
In a word,people should make good use of mobile phones instead of becoming addicted to phubbing(高分句型二)

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.

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