假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1.每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
，修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
My grandmother is 85year old．She is lovely and smart．She loves flowers and there is always many beautiful flowers in her house．She likes playing games with people whom visit her frequently．Some of them are so old as her； others are much-younger than her．Surprising，most of the time she wins!She is hard-working，too．Unless she is old，she does a lot of housework．Her house is always very clean and tidy．She even makes up food for five people every day．She thinks that doing housework keep her healthy．She is a great grandmother．She teaches me lots of things，like make dumplings and washing clothes．It's very lucky for me have my grandmother．

分析文章介绍了作者的祖母．她虽然已经八十五岁了，但还是很有活力．喜欢花，还爱和客人做游戏．她很勤劳，尽管老了但还能做很多家务．总能把屋子收拾得干干净净，每天给五个人做饭．她教会了我很多东西，有这样一位祖母真幸运．

解答 My grandmother is 85 year old．She is lovely and smart．She loves flowers and there is always many beautiful flowers in her house．She likes playing games with people whom visit her frequently．Some of them are so old as her； others are much-younger than her．Surprising，most of the time she wins!She is hard-working，too．Unless she is old，she does a lot of housework．Her house is always very clean and tidy．She even makes up food for five people every day．She thinks that doing housework keep her healthy．She is a great grandmother．She teaches me lots of things，like make dumplings and washing clothes．It's very lucky for me∧have my grandmother．
详解：
1．year改为years；名词错误．句意表达的是复数．
2．is改为are；主谓一致错误．句中flowers是复数，谓语动词要保持一致，也要用复数形式．
3．whom改为who/that；连词错误．句中visit her frequently修饰名词people，是一个定语从句；从句缺少主语，且先行词people是人，要用who或that来引导．
4．so改为as；副词错误．句意表达的是肯定，要用as…as…；so用在否定句中．
5．Surprising改为Surprisingly；句中surprising修饰整个句子内容，且有逗号分隔，要用副词形式．
6．Unless改为Though/Although；连词错误．句意表达的是转折，要用though或although连接让步状语从句．
7．up去掉；短语搭配错误．make up编造；句意表达的是做吃的，make是及物动词，直接带宾语．
8．keep改为keeps；主谓一致错误．句中的主语是doing housework，动名词短语作主语，谓语动词要用单数．
9．make改为making；动名词错误．句中make作介词like的宾语，要用动名词形式．
10．加to；句型搭配错误．it is+形容词+for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说怎么样．

点评短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．