Question

1．假如你是李华，你的美国中学生网友（ Nick）来信询问你春节期间在家乡当导游的打工经历．请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．当地旅游资源优势；2．你的优势条件及收获；3．分享风景照片．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．结束语已为你写好．
Dear Nick，
                                      
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 第一部分要直接表达很乐意收到朋友的来信并且愿意介绍自己在春节期间在家乡当导游的经历．其次述说整个过程，首先指出自己的家乡比较受欢迎的点在哪里，在寒暑假总能吸引很多的人来度假．然后说明自己在导游上具备怎样的优势，比如对旅游景点很熟悉并且语言表达能力强，与外地人沟通没有问题．最后要说出自己当导游的收获，对这次经历做出总结．在书信的结尾要注明愿意分享几张家乡的照片给朋友．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be glad to do sth．高兴做某事；during the Spring Festival 在春节期间；be known for 因为??????而出名；do well in doing sth．在??????做得好；gain???from 从??????中获得
My hometown is known for many national tourist attractions，which attract a large number of tourists，especially in holidays．（高分句型一）
I'm an expert about those places and I always do well in communicating with people from different places．（高分句型二）
 With this e-mail，I'd like to share with you several pictures of the scenery in my hometown．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Nick，
      I'm glad to receive your letter asking me about my experience as a guide during the Spring Festival．I worked as a guide during the Spring Festival in my hometown．My hometown is known for many national tourist attractions，which attract a large number of tourists，especially in holidays．（高分句型一）I'm an expert about those places and I always do well in communicating with people from different places．（高分句型二）I gained much experience as well as some money from it．In short，I think it's a job worth doing．
      With this e-mail，I'd like to share with you several pictures of the scenery in my hometown．（高分句型三）I'm sure you'll like them very much!（111 words）
      Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．