Question

【题目】这是你学校学生会最近在全校高中学生中进行的一次“你是否在上课时记笔记？”的调查。你作为校报记者，请用英语将调查的情况写成一篇短文刊登在校报上。

【写作内容】

调查范围和对象	全体高中学生，共2105人
调查结果	55%的学生记笔记，他们的学习成绩都较好
	45%的学生没记笔记，其中有的人认为课堂上认真听讲比记笔记更重要，有的想记笔记但不知如何下手，他们迫切需要老师的帮助。
你对调查结果的看法	教师应该培养学生课堂做笔记的能力

【写作要求】

只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently a survey on “Do you take notes in class?” has been carried out among all the 2015 senior students in our school. According to the survey, 55% of the students surveyed often take notes in class, which helps to get their studies improved. However, 45% of them don’t take notes, some of whom think that listening to the teacher attentively is much more important than taking notes in class. Others want to take notes, but they can’t for lack of the skill so they are badly in need of help fro teachers. As far as I am concerned, since so many students don’t know how to take notes properly, teachers are supposed to focus more on improving students’ skill of taking notes so as to help them make greater progress in study.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于议论文，根据提示信息和表格来讨论“上课是否记笔记”这一问题。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、表格是文章的总体框架，要在表格所提供的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了高级句式。比如which helps to get their studies improved.和some of whom think that listening to the teacher attentively is much more important than taking notes in class.是非限制性定语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语According to the survey；for lack of；in need of；As far as I am concerned；are supposed to；focus more on；make greater progress等。这些高级词汇短语或句型的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。