Question

【题目】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及—个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加—个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。

Today, more and more high school students have his own blog on the Internet. For one thing, it can provide colorful platform to show their talents, and for another, it is also a way to release their pressure. And this make it popular with high school students. But many parents and teachers hold a same view, think that managing a blog will be a waste of time and energy, while this should be used for study which is their main duty. Personal speaking, I do approve of this activity. Open and organizing an eye-catching blog needs various ability such as writing, designing and so on. Only if that we have those abilities can we make a good blog. But also, we can improve ourselves during the procedure of organizing our blogs.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】his 改为 their

【2】provide 后加a

【3】make 改为 makes

【4】same 改为 different

【5】think 改为 thinking

【6】Personal 改为 Personally

【7】Open 改为 Opening

【8】ability 改为 abilities

【9】去掉 if 后 that

【10】But改为 And

【解析】

试题分析：

【1】现在，越来越多的高中学生有自己的博客。主语是more and more high school students ，形容词性物主代词应该是their。

【2】首先，它可以提供一个丰富多彩的平台可以让学生展示他们的才能。Platform是可数名词，provide 后加a。

【3】这使得它很受高中生的欢迎。主语是it，谓语是make 改为 makes

【4】根据下文的：think that managing a blog will be a waste of time and energy,可知很多老师和家长有不同的观点。 same 改为 different。

【5】很多老师和家长有不同的观点，认为管理博客是浪费时间和精力。这里用现在分词做伴随状语。think 改为 thinking

【6】Personal 改为 Personally，Personally speaking,是固定短语“就我个人而言”。

【7】和organizing 并列做主语的是动名词Opening。

【8】开放组织一个吸引眼球的博客需要各种各样的能力。考查名词“能力”，various后面接名词复数：ability 改为 abilities。

【9】只有我们具备这些能力才能管理好的博客。If引导的是条件状语从句。

【10】我们在组织博客的过程中，还能够提高自己。这里和上文是并列关系：But改为 And