Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

There is a proverb that went “Honesty is the best policy”. I still remember the day that I was left alone at home. I broke a vase by chances, which was quite treasured by my father. When he came back, I was too fearful that I didn’t tell the truth. The cat was his excuse. My father said nothing, and I could read his distrust. The next morning, after a restless night, I admitted to my father that it was my fault. I saw relief in his eyes. He smiled at me. From now on, I never told lies. My honesty won me great trust from others, which benefited from my growth a lot. It is the “crack” that is reminding me all the time that I have long way to go. With the light through the crack I can see the road ahead clear.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 went →goes

 that→when    

 chances→chance

 too→so

 his→my

 and→but

 now →then

 benefited from→去掉from

 have∧ long way→a

 clear→clearly

【解析】

试题分析：本文叙述了作者有一次不小心打坏了父亲珍爱的花瓶，一开始作者说是小猫打坏的，他感觉父亲不相信，第二天早上，作者承认那是自己的过错，作者看到了父亲眼中的安慰。从此，作者再也不撒谎。而且作者的诚实赢得了别人的信任，对作者的成长受益匪浅。

 考查动词。这里that引导的定语从句，它在从句中作主语，既然是谚语，所以是一般现在时，所以用goes。

 考查定语从句。这里day是先行词，when在从句中作状语，that不能作状语，故用when。

 考查名词。这里是固定短语by chance偶然，意外 。

 考查连词。这里是so…that如此……以致于。他是如此地害怕以致于我不能告诉实情。

 考查代词。猫只是我的借口，根据上下文可知应该用my。

 考查连词。and表示前后是并列关系；but表示前后是转折关系。

 考查固定短语。From now on 从现在起；From then on从那时起。根据上文可知从那时起，我再也没有撒过谎。

 考查固定短语。benefited from从……中受益；benefit sth使什么受益。我的诚实从其他人那里赢得了信任，这有益于我以后的成长，故去掉from。

 考查固定短语。这次的错误一直提醒我我有很长的路要走。这里是固定短语have a long way有很长的路。

 考查副词。clear是形容词，clearly是副词，这里用副词来修饰动词。

考点：短文改错。